Just Writ
I may have bumped my head on an arch on my way to the gate, but
Falcon Forge
You must then arise early,
if you dare –
and can part the mists with a smile;
be able to spy a lonely heart
at distances set by enchantment
and clarity of the soul.
You need no wings to fly there,
do not fear –
yet walking slow will never do;
but prancing and skipping will allow
the vision to appear.
The forge stands on a chiseled rock,
once lightning struck –
and cleaved from fain mortal stone,
of which the earth and providence
are seen to be the same.
The shards were used to build a wall
this Abby here –
a link with creation of spirit,
cast beyond magic and willfulness
as sparks of pending dawn.
The smithy stands as a shadow,
nimbus of God –
a protection from the fury
of divine symphony yet unheard
except by poet’s dream.
The arm swings as a pendulum,
think metronome –
teathered to the fulcrum of when,
powered by our attention of now,
by choosing everbe.
The anvil is the Covenant,
the Agreement –
by which mind and soul and spirit
do mold by example and force of will
the future of mankind.
The hammer is all that sustains,
will not shatter --
when tested by humanity;
as justice, faith and simple kindness
are just a few samples.
And what of the need, the sword, the child,
so shapened there? –
Ah, that is where free will comes in,
and I can only remind that each test
has one end hot – the other cold.
papa faucon
3 Comments:
"Just Writ"
I have read your poem " Falcon Forge" over and over and I can understand much of what you say,some eludes me for the moment....
Fain means ancient way way back in another period of time ..found only earlier in another period of literature ..Archaic no longer used ..FAIN.....we have lost so much in literature I think this is a grand word .I had not heard it before....and Cleaved means split along a natural weakness and often looks as if it was made by cutting....it is as if was made this way by magical means.
AAAAA FULCRUM...The pivot about which a lever turns......perhaps used in the forge""The anvil is the covenant,the Agreement,by which mind and soul and spirit do mould by example,and force of will,
the future of mankind...
I think this resonates for me in a battle I am part of, to save a beautiful park against development of which part of it has a covenant which they will try to break by court action......
and justice and faith and kindness I am afraid are lacking.
Thank you I have printed out your poem for my group to read as those in the fight are of like mind ...
Thank you Papa Faucon
Lois (Muse of the Sea) 3.7.05.
Port Melb Victoria Australia on a cold wintry dull day of winter
Clearly a bump on the head gives you added clarity faucon. This is well chiseled from the rocky pages and clearly forged in a heated anvil. Quite takes my breath away.
Well writer of JUST WRIT we do have something in common........
Birth sign...LIBRA.Born Oct Zodiac sign...The Monkey...Perhaps this is why I so liked your story............
Tennessee...Now all I know of your place is from a neighbour long gone now. her name was Maureen Ferguson ...Back in 1946 she married an American G.I she met during the WW2....They were stationed here in Port Melbourne at the barracks.....She travelled overseas in 1950 by ship to meet his parents and see his "Property" in Tennessee..She stayed only 2 years and then returned disappointed at what she had seen...the poor state of the property I think ...They returned together bought a house here in Port Melb by the sea but her husband name of (Jimmy Singletary) was restless and returned home and they divorced ....She was my first boss when I went to work in an office in 1952 and her son to her second husband still lives next door in the house she and her new husband lived in.....
I can remember the Americans coming to Port as a young girl ,They were very generous giving us lollies/sweets canned drinks/ nylon stockings for the good looking young women in my street and they loved to have a family dinner with us esp a roast dinner,all homesick as I remember..There were lots of places to dance here and around the Melbourne city area and they loved to dance to live bands exp jazz and jitterbug etc....A good time was had by all I imagine...
For some years after we receved letters from Jimmy but after awhile they stopped coming and I presumed he had died perhaps.He would be in his 80's ....
Thanks again for you story
Lois (Muse of the Sea)
Port Melb Victoria Aust/4/7/05
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